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I am working on a logo for an acupuncture company. Here is what I have so far. I need some constructive critizism. Help me out please. http://grimes.hostmb.com/acu_logo/bg_acu10.jpg 
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I think the design is nice, you just need more consistency. If there is going to be shading on the pin then there should be some on the logo and vise versa.
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I think that's nice and clean but I don't know about the huge pin. I know ppl know what they are getting into but I think it needs to be more soothing.
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Does everyone see the "a" and understand why it looks how it does?
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The A is good, don't worry about it, maybe make the pin thinner though. If I saw that sign I'd have nightmares of people hammering railroad spikes onto my knees. I'm guessing the A is accu and the dot would be puncture. I like it. Maybe some more attention getting colors would be nice. Try some others out  Interesting side note regarding acupuncture, it's not voodoo and it does work. My Grandpa was blinded with diabetes for the last 10 years of his life. My grandma would load him into the Mercedes and drive all the way down to California to see a specialist who performed accupuncture. After treatment, he would regain a little of his vision for a few weeks. It was never permanent and his vision was actually pretty fuzzy and horrible, but for a man that hasn't seen a sunset or his own grandkids that's a gift.
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Lose the pin and you've got a winner.
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Does anyone see the ying-yang-ness? I am going for an asian feel.
Luke. Yeah, I think your understanding of the 'a' is a better one.
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Hey Strong bad, I am returning your fondue pot...
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actually, it sorta looks like the turn signal stalk on my Chevy or maybe an Atari 2600 joystick.
To give it an far east theme, i would suggest a fat guy with a big round belly. Let me know if you need a model, we can send Spatt.
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Holy moley! That is the best advice yet, dont be surprised if you see those ideas show up in the final design!
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