ok im not the one to critize stuff, but ill tell ya what i think, ill list it off cuz im really lazy right now
-it was sweet how he broke the boards
-nice music, timing could be a little better, but nice
BUT...heres what i didnt like if you are looking to show this to the public or people you are trying to recruit
-maybe have a little more karate whatnot in there, other than the board breaking
-home video camera/style i dont like
-him drinking something, smoking, and takin off his shirt might not be to good
-and at the end him swearing and talkin with the kid in the truck, and showin he broke something or injured himself isnt to reasuring if i wanted him to teach me
but gj and whatnot, just my 2 cents
