Man I'm stuck on this paragraph.......
I've spent the last few years bettering my education and experience. I've been to school, worked at a grueling pace, and been involved in a chaotic working environment. I feel as if I'm ready to enter this area of the workforce and put my talents to use.
How can I change this, but yet convey some form of the same message????????
I can help you when I get home tonight. Essentially: HOW have you bettered yourself with experience and education? WHAT have you done? Taken courses? Had relevant previous jobs? If so, say just that.
If you provide examples of what you've done to better yourself, that will answer your question very nicely.
Kerry
