That was pretty freaking sweet. I just finished going through one of my blues/roots rock phases, and that song would have fit right in. The playing was very tight, with little or none of the excessive noodling typical of amateur bands. Concise, to the point, and well-played. The vocals kind of remind me of Jerry Cantrell or Gordon Downie. I agree with the poster who suggested taking your time and not rushing the song when singing.
I'll check out the rest of your stuff. So far me likey