I actually like the blue text. It has a nice feel in that space of the design. What I am confused on is the "Translations". Why the white/lt blue diagonal across the text? Have you tried a "see through" for that text? Or perhaps some type of mesh like on the raquetball racket. You could also try entering in some subtle dance cues. I'm not sure what type of dancing they're doing, and it would be nice to incorporate that. My two cents!
EDIT: And another creative mojo idea: how about giving the blue "box" some diagonal wrapping and dimension, similar to that of a racket handle?
Last edited by PlatoSVT; 01/31/06 11:51 PM.
